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My January Top Ten List: Writing Lessons and Resources

OliviaWriting Workshop is something my students can count on nearly every day. It is a time when they can develop important ideas and relive small, memorable moments from their lives. It is also a time when there are not a lot of rules, as writing is the most open-ended subject I teach. While my students are asked to write within a specific genre, the freedom to express themselves in their own creative way is often liberating. However, there are always those students who find it difficult to perform when they are not given prescribed directions and are instead asked to come up with ideas on their own. This month’s top ten list includes a variety of writing lessons and resources that will challenge your top writers and motivate your reluctant writers as well.

READ ON to find creative mini-lessons, useful printables and posters, interactive whiteboard resources, ideas for incorporating technology into your Writing Workshop, and links to cool Web sites where students can publish their work and receive tips from published authors.

 

1. Show, Don’t Tell!
P1000821There are many professional books with lessons to help students practice this in their writing, but I am including some specific lessons I teach because this is one of the most powerful ways to significantly improve student writing. If you are unfamiliar with the concept, the goal is to teach students not to tell what is happening in their stories (Amy was nervous), but to show what is happening instead (Amy’s palms were sweaty). Below are resources that give examples of showing vs. telling and provide opportunities for students to practice the concept.

When I teach the following writing mini-lesson on my SMART Board, students bring their Writer’s Notebooks to the carpet. (See my September Top Ten List to learn how my students spice up their Writer’s Notebooks.) The first few slides provide students with examples of showing vs. telling and then they are given three telling sentences. They must choose one to rewrite as a showing paragraph (the active engagement part of the mini-lesson). Students then head back to their seats and attempt to incorporate this skill into their own writing. Download the complete SMART Board file.

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This second SMART Board lesson is called “Guess the Emotion” and can be used on an additional day to reinforce the concept. During the teaching part of the lesson I read the showing paragraphs and students must determine what emotion I am “showing.”  Each student is then given an emotion card and is asked to write a paragraph that shows the emotion without using the actual word. (As part of this active engagement part of the lesson, students could share their paragraphs with their writing partners.) Students then head back to their seats and attempt to incorporate this skill into their own writing. Download the SMART Board file for "Guess the Emotion."

Guess the Emotion Emotion 2

If you do not have a SMART Board in your classroom, you can download worksheets that relate to the lessons described above. You can find also use this Show, Don’t Tell card game to help your students practice this concept.

 

2. Incorporate “Show, Don’t Tell” in Your Read-Alouds
It is so important for student writers to recognize good writing when they are reading or listening to books read aloud. In addition to teaching “Show, Don’t Tell” during Writing Workshop, I also read aloud class library books that provide additional examples. Before teaching the read-aloud lesson below, you will want to collect a few good mentor texts like the following models:

Wemberly_worried Lilly's Purple Plastic Purse Julius Chrysanthemum The painter I Remember Papa Night Noises Memory String

Teaching a "Show, Don’t Tell" Read-Aloud Lesson: In this lesson, each student is given an “emotion stick” that contains an “emotion face” with the word that describes the emotion written below the face (nervous, excited, scared, etc.). As I read the story aloud, students hold up their stick when they hear an example of the author “showing” the emotion they have been assigned.
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You can download a PDF file of the emotion faces you see below. If you download the Print Shop version of the file, you can enlarge each face, print them out, and attach them to sticks.
Mood Faces

Have Students Do It on Their Own: I try to integrate Reading and Writing Workshop as often as possible, so it is important for students to also be looking for examples of “Show, Don’t Tell” when reading independently. Students can use the recording sheet below to jot down examples that they find in their IDR books.

Show Don't Tell Recording Sheet


 

3. Teach Students to Use a Variety of Leads in Their Writing
I am not a proponent of prescribed writing, but when nearly half of my 3rd graders were starting their stories with “One day . . . ,” I knew it was time to introduce them to a variety of leads that they could use to gain the interest of their audience. As I often tell them, a reader usually decides very early in a story if he will continue reading or abandon the text. The author needs to draw the reader in from the beginning. Below are posters I created of the different types of leads I teach my students. (Many of the ideas for the titles of the leads come from Barry Lane’s awesome book Reviser's Toolbox.)

Action Snapshot Sound Effect Question Flashback Talking Lead
Download PDF files of the ActionFlashbackQuestionSnapshotSound Effect, and Talking lead posters.

While my students do all of the writing in their Writer’s Notebook, they also keep helpful handouts in a writing folder. Download this Leads in Narrative Writing handout that gives students an easily accessible reminder of each type of lead. You can also download the material in a SMART Board file.

 

Screenshot 4. Choose Your Own Adventure!

When I taught 5th grade, my students were especially interested in Choose Your Own Adventure books. They would read them during IDR time in Reading Workshop, so I decided to add a writing unit that focused on this genre.  Many of the lessons I taught were similar to those I would teach during any fiction unit of study, but extra emphasis was placed on figurative language, creating suspense, and organizing their interactive adventure. The stories were finally published as PowerPoint books so that readers could link to different pages as they made their decisions. (In PowerPoint, students can easily insert buttons that link to different pages in the slide show.) You could do the same project using hyperlinks in MS Word or any Web page design program.

Download the PPT Choose Your Own Adventure story you see above or the Choose Your Own Adventure template my students used when writing their stories. (Students will need many copies of the second page since they will really be writing several stories in one.) When I taught 5th grade, I was unfortunately required to give grades in writing, so I also have a Choose Your Own Adventure grading rubric for this project.

 

5. Vocabulary Word Wall
We all know that it is so important to help our students grow their vocabulary. This word wall, an idea taken from The CAFE Book by Gail Boushey and Joan Moser, encourages students to tune in to interesting vocabulary words during their reading so that they can also incorporate the words into their writing.

Word wall

When I read to my students on the reading carpet, they bring their writing folders with them. As I am reading, I will pause (usually no more than once or twice during a story) to note interesting vocabulary words that I want to introduce. I choose the words ahead of time and add them to our class word wall, and students add them to their individual word collection sheets in their writing folders. I make sure to use these words whenever I can (in conversations, lessons, D.O.L. sentences, etc.) so that students become comfortable using them in their own writing pieces.

6. Writer’s Notebook Assessments

P1080350Do you ever get frustrated with the lack of effort put forth by some students during Writing Workshop? I am appalled when I confer with a student who has only written a few sentences each day.  While I am not suggesting that teachers grade students’ writing in their Writer’s Notebooks, I do feel that students need to be held accountable for the writing work that they do each day.

Daily Self-Assessment: Below is a self-assessment that writers fill out at the end of workshop time as a way to hold themselves accountable for both the quality and quantity of their writing.  Students turn these in at the end of each week. I glance over them to see which students I need to meet with. Download a Writing Workshop self-checklist.

Independent Checklist


Teacher Assessment:  This rubric is more comprehensive and is to be completed by the teacher at the end of each month or grading period, depending on how much writing your students are doing. You can even have students complete the assessment as well to compare their assessment to yours. Download the Writer's Notebook teacher assessment rubric.

Writer's Notebook Teacher Assessment Rubric

 

IMG_4823 7. Publishing Student Writing

There is nothing more motivating for students than knowing that others will read their work. Publishing gives student authors a sense of audience and voice. It’s authentic. It offers a reason for doing what they are doing instead of just writing to please the teacher or receive a good grade. At the end of our fiction writing unit, students’ final drafts are typed by parent volunteers, and the students paste the text into hardcover books and add personal illustrations to make their book special.

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IMG_4757Once the books are completed, we have some type of publishing party. In the past we have had an Author’s Tea where we invite parents to hear our stories, and we have also read our stories to our kindergarten buddies. However the students’ favorite audience seems to be their peers. For this reason, we have a cozy read-in where students wear their pajamas to school and bring their sleeping bags, pillows, and blankets. Before the read-in begins, each student puts a library card in the back of his or her book. When a classmate reads a book, he or she writes his name on the library card so that the author knows who has read his book. Our school orders the hardcover books you see in the photos from www.barebooks.com.

 

Web Sites That Help Students Create/Publish Books


Student treasures main StudentTreasures.com:
 With this Web site, create FREE class books for grades K–2 and individual hardcover books for students in grades 3–5. They send you kits so that students can write their story and add illustrations to each page. The kits are then sent back to the company, which binds them. Parents and/or grandparents can then purchase reprints of the books. View sample books on their Web site.

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StudentPublishing.com: This site offers a FREE Internet Storybook program that allows students to create their books online and then receive a paperback copy of the book to keep. They also have a mail-in program where students can create their manuscript and illustrations on paper at school and send them in to be published. The final product can show the student’s original handwriting, or the story can be typeset. Teachers in lower grades can also create a FREE class book that is durably bound in a hardback leatherette cover. View sample books.

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8. Digital Storytelling

Students can actually create their own digital books that can be viewed online using a great FREE program called Microsoft Photo Story 3 for Windows. Students can create stories in any genre and make them come alive using this software program. The program allows students to create slide shows using actual photographs or scanned pictures of their own illustrations. Students then add their own voices so that they are reading their story aloud when the corresponding pictures come up in the slide show. In this way, students are also practicing fluent reading. The author can also add text and music. If you are in a building that uses Windows, this program is simple and easy to use, even for my 3rd graders!  

RiverSee some really creative examples from some students in Georgetown, Kentucky.  

The easiest way to learn about Photo Story is to use a Web tutorial. If you prefer to read the material, however, see this beginner's guide

 



 

Writing with writers

9. Scholastic’s Writing With Writers

Writing With Writers
is an awesome resource on Scholastic.com.  As a teacher, I know that there is no greater motivation for students than tips and advice from real, published authors, especially when those authors' books are on the shelves of our classroom library. If you have not checked this out or used it with your students, you are missing out! Where else can students receive step-by-step instructions on writing a myth from Jane Yolen, advice on how to capture moments using descriptive writing from the late and great Virginia Hamilton, tips for writing fun poetry from Jack Prelutsky (along with a Webcast of him reading his poetry aloud), and so much more! Teacher guides are also available for each of the nine featured genres.

 

10. Great Writing Ideas From My Top Teaching Colleagues

Angela Angela Bunyi:  During her first year as a Scholastic teacher mentor, Angela wrote a great article called "Supporting Your Budding Writers."  It is full of ways to help those students who are constantly asking, “What can I write about?” She provides quick and easy methods for helping your writers self-select writing topics and become independent thinkers. 

 

Ruth Ruth Manna:  Ruth wrote a helpful post called "Teaching Writing — Choosing Topics."  It focuses on the importance of providing students the freedom to select their own topics, a staple of an authentic Writing Workshop. She provides a list of ways to help students brainstorm ideas for narrative writing.

 

 

Danielle Danielle Mahoney:  Danielle wrote two great posts on looking closely at your students' writing to truly plan and teach effective mini-lessons. The focus of her posts is to plan meaningful instruction that targets students' needs rather than simply adhering to a prescribed, scripted curriculum. Check out "Assess, Plan, Teach! Part 1 — Looking at Student Work" and "Assess, Plan, Teach! Part 2 — Strategies to Support Young Writers."

 

Megan Megan Power:  Megan wrote a post last year on word choice designed specifically for primary writers. She showed how she uses picture books to help her kindergartners "play with words" using color words, similes and metaphors, onomatopoeia, alliteration, and strong verbs. Check out her creative post "Unwrapping the 6 — Traits With Primary Writers: Word Choice."

 

 

Please add your thoughts about teaching writing, and share your favorite writing lessons! 

Comments

  • #1 Kenalyn

    Thursday, September 29, 2011 at 10:10 AM

    I just found your website. Thank you for sharing your ideas with fellow teachers. I enjoy your 6 lead posters. Do you have similiar posters for endings/wrapups?

  • #2 Ashley

    Tuesday, June 14, 2011 at 06:13 PM

    Beth-

    You are an inspiration. Thank you for sharing all of your wonderful ideas. I can't wait to try them in my classroom. Digital storytelling is an innovative way to get kids writing- was it difficult for your students to figure out?

    Thanks!

  • #3 Clementine

    Thursday, April 28, 2011 at 03:15 AM

    I'd love to offer a writers workshop for 8-12 year olds at a homeschool coop next school year. The problem is we'd only be meeting for 1 to 1-1/2 hours once a week. Can I conduct a successful writers workshop if I'm unable to work with my students on a daily basis?

  • #4 Beth Newingham

    Tuesday, April 26, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    Amanda (comment #48),

    We weave grammar directly into writing workshop as often as possible. However, we also do a great deal of grammar during morning work time as well. You can check out our daily schedule to see where "morning work" time fits in: http://hill.troy.k12.mi.us/staff/bnewingham/myweb3/indexschedule.htm

    Thanks for reading my blog!

    -Beth

  • #5 Beth Newingham

    Tuesday, April 26, 2011 at 10:00 PM

    Debra (comment #47),

    I have the students' faces printed on magnetic paper next to a magnetic wall near our writing center. Students move their name magnet to the component of the writing process that they are in. They can also move their name to the "I Need a Conference" box if necessary.

    -Beth

  • #6 Amanda

    Sunday, April 24, 2011 at 01:29 PM

    Beth,
    When do you teach Language skills such as subject and predicate,singular possessive and plural possessive nouns, etc...?

  • #7 Debra

    Thursday, February 17, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Do you have any great examples of a management tool that could be used to determine at a glance where students are in the writing process and when they need to conference?

  • #8 Beth Newingham

    Wednesday, February 09, 2011 at 10:07 PM

    Kelly (comment #41),

    You asked if I had any ideas for a summer writing camp. While I have never planned or taught a summer writing camp, I think I would just use my best lessons that I teach during the school year. I'm sure you have lessons or even entire units that your students enjoy the most.

    Having a fun author celebration at the end where parents are invited might be enjoyable as well! In our classroom, we open a poetry cafe each year to celebrate and highlight the poems students write during our poetry genre study. Perhaps you could adapt some ideas from a post that I wrote last year about the cafe. Here is a link to that post: http://blogs.scholastic.com/top_teaching/2010/05/poetry-cafe.html

    -Beth

  • #9 Beth Newingham

    Wednesday, February 09, 2011 at 09:58 PM

    Janet (comments 39 & 40),

    Thanks so much for your nice comments! I'm so glad you are enjoying the resources I've shared and are finding them to be useful in your classroom!

    -Beth

  • #10 Beth Newingham

    Wednesday, February 09, 2011 at 09:57 PM

    Melissa (comment #38),

    I treat incomplete reading logs the same way that I treat any missing assignment in my classroom. The students receives debits in our classroom economy. You can read more about my classroom economy in this old post from last year: http://blogs.scholastic.com/top_teaching/2010/01/class-economy.html

    Since the reading log is considered extremely important, I also do not hesitate to call a student's parents if a child is consistently not reading at home.

    -Beth

  • #11 Beth Newingham

    Wednesday, February 09, 2011 at 09:52 PM

    Rose (comment #37),

    You asked some specific questions about strategy groups. I know that you mentioned you already read my reading working assessment post, but I actually provide more specific information about strategy groups in an older post from last year, "Reading Workshop: What it Looks Like in My Clasroom." Here is a link to that post: http://blogs.scholastic.com/top_teaching/2009/10/reading-workshop.html

    Let me know if you still have questions after reading the strategy lesson section of the post. There is even a handout that explains how the lessons are different from guided reading lessons, and there is also a strategy lesson planning sheet that you can download.

    I hope this helps!

    -Beth

  • #12 Beth Newingham

    Wednesday, February 09, 2011 at 09:45 PM

    Desiree (comment #36),

    You asked where I get the decorative theme paper that my students use for publishing. I have found different bordered paper at many different stores include office supply stores (Office Max, Staples), Meijer, Walmart, Kinkos, various teacher stores, and even dollar stores! I just keep my eyes open and purchase them at different places when I see a design that I think might be useful in my classroom.

    -Beth

  • #13 Kelly

    Wednesday, February 09, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    Hello...I have read so many of your posts and various sites where you have been referenced. I am looking for some great ideas for a summer writing camp. Do you have any ideas? I am totally open and can do most anything. Please share if you have tried something in the pas that you think the children loved!

  • #14 Janet E. Muller

    Tuesday, February 08, 2011 at 06:52 PM

    You guys are the Rock Stars of Education!! Thank you for such a wonderful site. I come back to it often for inspiration. Thanks for sharing the pdfs and smart board files. Your classrooms are so creative and so organized.
    Thank you again. Take care and keep posting!
    Janet - Palm Desert, Calif.

  • #15 Janet E. Muller

    Tuesday, February 08, 2011 at 06:48 PM

    You guys are the Rock Stars of Education! I love your site, I come back to it often to get inspired. Thank you for all of the wonderful ideas and thanks for sharing your pdfs and smart board files. I strive to be as creative as you some day. Take care and keep the info. coming!!!
    Janet - Palm Desert, Calif.

  • #16 Melissa

    Wednesday, February 02, 2011 at 03:06 PM

    Hi Beth!

    I have an unrelated question, but wanted to pick your brain...I noticed before that you have kids log books in a reading log each night at home. What do you do when kids don't fill in their reading logs?

  • #17 Rose

    Tuesday, February 01, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    Hello Beth!
    I was so excited to recently find your website. It is amazing. I also teach third grade and use Reader's and Writer's workshop, Words Their Way and The Cafe. So as you can imagine your sight was a gold mine for me!
    Thank you for your blog on writing the lead posters were awesome!
    I actually have a reading question for you. I have been using Reader's workshop for about 6 years. I am still trying to get better at strategy groups. Specifically, I feel a bit overwhelmed about what to teach and how long to teach a skill and how to assess and decide if I need to move on. I realize this is a huge questions. But any tips or advice would be greatly appreciated. (I did read a little about it in your reading assessment post and already ordered the book you recommended.) Thank you for all you tips and advice!

  • #18 Desiree

    Tuesday, February 01, 2011 at 05:57 PM

    Hi Beth,

    I really enjoy your site and just used these smartboard file today in my class! I was wondering...where do you get the theme paper with lines for publishing! I love that idea and can't see to find that paper anywhere!

  • #19 Beth Newingham

    Saturday, January 29, 2011 at 10:32 PM

    Amy (comment #34),

    I'm glad you liked this post! Check back next month when I share a similar post with lessons and resources for reading fiction!

    -Beth

  • #20 Amy

    Saturday, January 29, 2011 at 03:40 PM

    Thank you for sharing this information!!

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